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[User Picture]From: [info]dimestore_romeo
2013-07-13 08:48 pm (UTC)

Dangerous Game

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I loved the tension in this. And the cameraderie of all the recruits on the other side of the door. The questions they were asked were so interesting!

Also, Ryouma and Kakashi's awkward bonding/flirting/something. I'm loving the way that they consistently bounce off each other (providing entertainment to everyone around them). I feel like a really sincere relationship is forming, in a way, and Kakashi lets him get away with so much.

The way Ryouma's maybe-dyslexia approached here is nicely upfront and really woven into his life and his interactions, and it's great to see the way he gets around it and how it flavours the way he approaches relationships with others. It isn't ignored, and I like that.
[User Picture]From: [info]hatake_kakashi
2013-08-03 07:55 pm (UTC)

Re: Dangerous Game

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Ack, I am so late responding to this. SORRY, ROMEO.

Also, Ryouma and Kakashi's awkward bonding/flirting/something. I'm loving the way that they consistently bounce off each other (providing entertainment to everyone around them). I feel like a really sincere relationship is forming, in a way, and Kakashi lets him get away with so much.

This delights me. :D The introduction of the team does shift the dynamic slightly, but there will be more to come in the future.

The way Ryouma's maybe-dyslexia approached here is nicely upfront and really woven into his life and his interactions, and it's great to see the way he gets around it and how it flavours the way he approaches relationships with others. It isn't ignored, and I like that.

Excellent, because that's really formative for Ryouma, so it deserves the screen-space. Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for the review. <333